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Perfect Chaos by ~hurdofchris:iconhurdofchris:

Categories Digital Art > 3-Dimensional Art > Scenes > Spacescapes

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A preview of my latest. Please critique!!!

EDIT: In case you didn't see the first, I added the moon in the foreground and a supernova in the background. Ben, I did the AA stuff. I made the beam on the right look like it was fading away. The cracks in the planet are blurred a little (they were too sharp before). The glow behind the planet looks more realistic now.

If there are still discrepancies please point them out. My next edit will be the final.

EDIT: This deviation has been finalized.

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*BenRR Dec 20, 2007, 7:01:09 PM
Amazing work!! I can't find much to nitpick, the planet and the beam on the right need some AA, but other than that it looks astounding!! :wow:

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Mood: Joy ~Quenlin Dec 21, 2007, 1:05:41 AM
*sits in awe typing absolutely nothing*

Alright. I'm saying this. Looked at the first, looked at the last, you have seriously improved. Just a few pointers.

A motion blur will really smooth out the light coming out of the planet. Did that on my Zodiac Circle Revisited. And it will work on the light behind the planet as well. Snatch it with the Magic Wand and use the blurs to smooth it out evenly. It'll take some time but it'll be worth it.

When that beast is finished, you better put it up as a print. Cause I swear, that would sell.

I swear my Zodiac Circle PDN on it.

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~hurdofchris Dec 21, 2007, 1:35:17 PM
I've never really thought about putting any of my works up for prints. Didn't think they would sell that much, but hey! I'll give it a shot...

P.S. Is the same okay (minus the ?s)?
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~hurdofchris Dec 21, 2007, 1:59:52 PM
Ben... I consider you my official AA critic. Congrats!! Lol.
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Mood: Lmao ~hurdofchris Dec 21, 2007, 3:32:08 PM
Note: I meant "name" not same. Lol
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~Madhatterl7 Dec 22, 2007, 6:07:59 AM
I like it alot the only thing I can see is the erosion from the blast on the planet good work

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~Lotay Dec 22, 2007, 10:36:12 PM
Very nice work I might say, keep working at it. :D

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=Phoenix-06 Feb 6, 2008, 6:40:10 PM
nice, i actually did a very similar piece to this a few weeks back, big beam thing coming from a star ripping a planet to bits hehe great concept i think

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